Self Destruction

Running from the darkness 
As fast as my feet can carry 
Tripping over sticks and stones 
Abrasions upon my skin so fresh 
My canvas does it paint blood red 
To carry on, self destructive to the end

Reviews

[MachinaWriter]

"Tripping over sticks and stones"

An amazing line. A very simple poem with a lot of emotional depth. Loved it. Thanks for sharing this ^^

[R Townsend]

Thank you for your review. I am new here, but writerscafe seems like it is what I was looking for.

[MachinaWriter]

Its a pretty good site. I've been using it for a few months now and its great getting to read other people's work and also have other people read your own work. Btw, I'd love for you to take a look at some of my poems, if you ever get the chance. If not, then I still loved this poem and again I want to thank you for sharing this ^^

[R Townsend]

I would be glad to give your poems a read. I am supposed to be studying for a Psychopathology Exam, So I will have to rain check.

[MachinaWriter]

lol then get to studying. Like I said, when you get the time. I wish you good luck on the exam. ^^