A page of the past...

Just thought I'll share

Sometimes I thank god for putting me thru the things I went thru, sometimes I curse him...

            Sometimes I regret the decisions I made, sometimes I am glad I took the chance...

but no matter what, it is over and I am who I am today because of what I went thru

            For that, I am grateful and with that knowledge, everything is slightly easier

 

Reviews

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

Thank you for sharing this. Sometimes in the busyness of the world we forget to look back on ourselves and think, would we be the same if different things had happened? But it is because of our past that we grow, hopefully into better, more beautiful souls. It's nice and a very good thing to think of every once in a while, even if it means learning our lessons all over again. So thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed it because it made me grateful for my past, and of all the events that lead my down the road I chose. Wonderful write, both enlightening and enjoyable.

[ShadowWolf]

The past is the past...when each step forward is a lesson and a learning from one's mistakes then Life becomes easier.

[deathbroken]

I agree with you a 100%
this was amazing the words you used.

[Vatsayayana]

Powerful words darling!
No truer words could be uttered.
We are who we are, what we are, because of what we've been through.
It defines us, encompasses us and reminds us where we've been and how far we've traveled.
Wonderful!

[Fallenangeljc]

You always make me wonder about your words...

Sincerely Yours
James

[MarieCo214]

It's interesting and if I had a different sort of personality, I'd really think about this. Maybe you should separate the lines a bit. With a poem, even if it's just your thoughts, it looks like your crowding the words together. It's not very good for the appearance in my opinion.
I like the message, definitely, and the way you state it flows smoothly enough. The vibe is calm and really leaves the reader to think about the piece. Well done. Still, all I can stress is presentation. That's all that I can suggest improvement.
It's good. Keep writing.