Irresistible

“But he’s irresistible, up close and personal

Now inescapable, I can hardly breathe...”

 

That just doesn’t fit you,

you are the opposite.

You are kind and patient,

gentle like the waves upon the beach.

Like a soothing balm on my soul,

the gentle rain on my skin.

There is no need for words,

or excuses... masks or lies.

 

“...More then just physical, deeper then spiritual

His ways are powerful...”

 

Soft and gentle, making me yield to you

The same way the coastline yields before...

the touch of the ocean.

Different and yet always together

 

“...Irresistible to me”

 

Not that I want to resist or escape you anyway.

Just want to stay... in your embrace... forever

 

Author's Note

The words in qoutation marks and in red is lyrics from the song "Irresistible" from Jessica Simpson

Reviews

[WordMaster]

A short and compelling poem about a subject we all know to well

Your word selection helps to bring the poems message to the reader clearly and
with dramatic feeling

The structure is artistic and imaginative

Well Done!

[darkgurl]

Now I enjoyed this write, It's soft. this is wonderful.

[Blue Sky]

The soft embrace of this poem
is so nice, the wording is just superb
as the words of the heart for the one
that holds that power of attraction
like a magnet, wording is just superb
with such wonderful flow with such nicely
conveyed images, really nicely done!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a very clever write! And the way you used the lyrics is really commendable.
Awesome composition... There is a passion in this writing..
Also, I found your original writing part more sensual than the lyrical part :)
Very soothing.
"the gentle rain on my skin.
There are no need for words,
or excuses... masks or lies."- Wow! What a great imagery!
Great work...Keep writing :)

[Vatsayayana]

The mixture here is perfect.
I love how you've combined another viewpoint or another way of wanting someone in with your own desires.
This truly is fabulous.
Your words have such a flowing quality to them. Picture perfect.
The words in red are more like lust where yours are more like love.
Very powerful!
Brava!

[ShadowWolf]

Weaving your own words with the lyrics of the song worked very well.

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I noticed the phrases from the lyrics. A clever compositon, and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing