A Poem by Rachael

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I want to play in a band with a crazy name;
To live a life outside my own.
I want to break the shell that holds me in and contains all I am capable of accomplishing.

Sometimes all we need is that first chord of music,
that first resonating sound which can do the extraordinary;
Rupture the thickest bubble in which we surround ourselves with.

For we are too petrified to shatter it alone.

I want to play in a band with crazy people
just so I can be the voice of reason
and experience the power that responsibility is supposed to supersede.

© 2011 Rachael

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Love it!! I've always wanted to do this too, in fact, I think this is a dream shared by most teenagers. Great job on capturing the feeling so strongly with so few words.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Amazing and strong words. I like your desire and strength of voice and dreams in the poem. A excellent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Worked for me.
You should be standing on a soapbox screaming
with a bullhorn!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on July 6, 2011
Last Updated on July 6, 2011




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