Lets Rush

Lets Rush

A Poem by sabinn
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Sometimes you just wanna rush down somewhere beautiful with someone special.

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Let's rush down to a place,
where no loneliness recites.

Let's rush down to a valley,
Where we can be on our own.

Where we can sing,dance,
And only you and me.

Where you and I can walk along.
No fuzz, no mist & the sun is clear.

Let's rush down,
To the enchanted dream.

A Garland of cheezy dreams,
A garden of the way we feel.

Oh baby let's rush down real quick,
With my sneakers and your stubborn heels.

With my silly words,
And your apple skin.

Oh baby I can't wait,
Lets rush above our broken dreams.

Let's rush,
Cause I don't wanna wait.

To feel you with my frozen lips,
Before my heart is broken,
Let's rush above the broken dream.

© 2018 sabinn


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sabinn
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I liked this poem a lot.
"To feel you with my frozen lips,
Before my heart is broken,
Let's rush above the broken dream."
The above lines. Hopeful and needed. Thank you sabin for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

7 Months Ago

thank you so much:)



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I felt like I could relate to this poem, The feeling of wanting to do everything possible with the person you love til time runs out..Or til things go bad. I liked the short lines it really sends the feeling of being rushed, Thank you for sharing this poem.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

7 Months Ago

thank you so much. :)
I liked this poem a lot.
"To feel you with my frozen lips,
Before my heart is broken,
Let's rush above the broken dream."
The above lines. Hopeful and needed. Thank you sabin for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

7 Months Ago

thank you so much:)

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sabinn

Kathmandu, Nepal



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