Walk

Walk

A Poem by sabinn
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the sweet heart walk

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Not a drive or a ride,

I would prefer to walk.

With those entire little step we take,

I am lost in the word you say,

The rhythm that matches our feet,

I fall in love with you so deep.

To tell the truth,

I just want to stay longer with you.

May be I am a fool,

But I am lost in your word,

Every little word you say,

My ears are wide open and want to stay.

I miss this in every walk we take.

Not in the front nor when back,

My heart smiles when we walk side by side.

With every step we take I don’t want this road to end,

Only if I could tell that I will hold you till the end,

Only if i could say that I will stay forever till the end,

Only if I could confess that I have and will love you till the end.

 

 

 

 

© 2020 sabinn


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Your poem shows both the carefree loving way it can be when two people walk together & also you show a deeper meaning about how it's better to slow down & take in the details of what we're doing in this life, what we're doing when we spend time with another person, really feeling it & soaking it in. Back in the old days, people went for walks all the time, just to spend some animated time together to share or soak in quiet feelings (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, I like the way to got around the poem and described it with your point of view, a.. read more



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Bruh! You are still madly in love I suppose. Just go talk to her you p***y!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


I agree my friend. A walk with someone, you love. best days of our life. Not rushing and holding hands. Utopia, my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


I admire the love the poem portrays...
being in love with someone and every little thing they do but also not being to express is relatable and something that has happened to everyone.. 👍

Posted 3 Months Ago


sabinn

3 Months Ago

Yup not being able to express that's where most love story end, if only to express was easy enough. .. read more
Your poem shows both the carefree loving way it can be when two people walk together & also you show a deeper meaning about how it's better to slow down & take in the details of what we're doing in this life, what we're doing when we spend time with another person, really feeling it & soaking it in. Back in the old days, people went for walks all the time, just to spend some animated time together to share or soak in quiet feelings (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, I like the way to got around the poem and described it with your point of view, a.. read more
I am not big on poems but i can see a lot of people can relate to it, it is nice and it makes you think of whats inside ones self

Posted 7 Months Ago


sabinn

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much 😊
Ifs and buts and onlys have made our life limited. We want to but, we would if, we could only.... love is first attacked by these limitations. Hope you conquer a sweet love in your life. Be blessed.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much 😊
Tahsin.Z🍁

7 Months Ago

Ya welcome! :)

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sabinn

Kathmandu, Nepal



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