Walk

Walk

A Poem by sabinn
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the sweet heart walk

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Not a drive or a ride,

I would prefer to walk.

With those entire little step we take,

I am lost in the word you say,

The rhythm that matches our feet,

I fall in love with you so deep.

To tell the truth,

I just want to stay longer with you.

May be I am a fool,

But I am lost in your word,

Every little word you say,

My ears are wide open and want to stay.

I miss this in every walk we take.

Not in the front nor when back,

My heart smiles when we walk side by side.

With every step we take I don’t want this road to end,

Only if I could tell that I will hold you till the end,

Only if i could say that I will stay forever till the end,

Only if I could confess that I have and will love you till the end.

 

 

 

 

© 2020 sabinn


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Your poem shows both the carefree loving way it can be when two people walk together & also you show a deeper meaning about how it's better to slow down & take in the details of what we're doing in this life, what we're doing when we spend time with another person, really feeling it & soaking it in. Back in the old days, people went for walks all the time, just to spend some animated time together to share or soak in quiet feelings (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I am not big on poems but i can see a lot of people can relate to it, it is nice and it makes you think of whats inside ones self

Posted 1 Month Ago


Ifs and buts and onlys have made our life limited. We want to but, we would if, we could only.... love is first attacked by these limitations. Hope you conquer a sweet love in your life. Be blessed.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much 😊
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

Ya welcome! :)

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Kathmandu, Nepal



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