Invisible

I don't pretend to be anything great
I don't claim to shine in any type of subject
I don't pretend to stick out in a crowed

People look at me for a second
But pass me by without a second thought
People don't really see me at all

I am invisible
I don't pretend to be anything more
I have excepted it

People don't take the time to see me
They don't take the time to know me
They don't bother to waste time to understand

I found comfort in my loneliness
I don't know anything other then being alone
And overlooked

I don't know how I got here
But it's all I know
And I don't think i'll know anything else  

Author's Note

what do think?

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

repetitious, and it doesn't really go anywhere. If you take out everything but the 1st, 4th and 5th stanza it would be the same poem but much more concise. Just a suggestion.

[CrashDavis47]

pretty good. some issues with spelling but other than that good