Sweetness

Sweetness

A Poem by sarah

The young man took the young woman in his arms
He dried her tears
He took her broken body
And tried to heal her with his love

He watched her cry
He watched her wince in pain at his slight touch
He watched her weakness
Grow to strength

He held her close
And cradled her sweetly
As she ran away from the ghosts in her dream
He saw her whimper like a small child

He would rock her back and forth till she fell asleep
He wondered how any man could hurt such a creature
Her sweet innocence astounded him
Her peaceful smile made his heart glow

He wanted to kill the man who hurt her
The man who had broken not only her body
And spirit
But her heart as well

He couldn't help loving her
For her strength
She had everything
He needed

He saved her life
But at the same time
She saved his as well

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I wrote this thanks to one of the writers on here, her story. It is amazing check her out. Blue Misty Eyes she is amazing!
http://www.writerscafe.org/seansmommy84

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A beautiful poem with a positive ending. We are allowed to helpful and be kind many times in a life. Love and friendship is returned to kind and loving hearts. A excellent poem. I like the story and the kind emotion of this poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is lovely, I like how you can feel the vulnerability not only in the victim but the patron

Posted 12 Years Ago


i still love this poem lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A wonderful story. Thank you for sharing. Only saw one thing and that is 'women should be woman' in the beginning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Nice poem. I've favourited this. Some boys like to go after the vulnerable girls lol.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ouch , like it also

Posted 13 Years Ago


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lovely sentiment..isn't it what love should be ..?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very touching and sweet of you to write such a thing for another

Posted 13 Years Ago


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You can actually feel his love while reading this! My heart constricted painfully just reading it! Good Job :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This was a great write and a wonderful read! The love he has for her could be felt!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Sad but hopeful men are dogs


Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on December 5, 2010
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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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