Pushing buttons

Pushing buttons

A Poem by sarah

You know exactly what to do
To make my mind lose control

You know the very buttons to push
To make me crazy

You know exactly what to say
To make me care for you

You know my limits
And you push them

You figured out  I can't hate you
And you do all you can to see if it's true

You know exactly what to do
To get under my skin

You know me
You know every button
Every thing there is to know
And you use it to your advantage 

© 2010 sarah


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There is something here that is missing... I don't know what, I don't know how, maybe a bit of back story... I just kept looking for more after it was done. Left me kind of empty. Other than that the concept is fine and what is written here is good, just that personally I was kind of looking for more.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Wow, this is amazing! I can also relate to this. Very true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gad, I hate button pushers ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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some people know us in a way others don't..no..I think we allow certain people to allow access to the vulnerable part of us..and we react to them..it's about control..thought provoking..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cool. you always say it so clearly...being more grounded in the "romantic" style of writing i always wish you would embellish with metaphors and imagery...but then that would be me "reviewing" you based on my OWN opinion... Is a steak sandwich a steak sandwich just because of the steak? Or are the bread, the garnish, the condiments important elements of the sandwich...perhaps you need a little "A1 sauce" on the piece to tantalize your readers taste buds...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very Nice written!
Somehow, I think it's very relateble to me!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stalker!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good. Don't they all know how to push our buttons and use it to their advantage? At least that's what I think. Great write, though. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

They ususally do. Nice poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well done I like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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