Love

I believe in love
And in romance
I believe that there is a good guy out there
Waiting for me

I have had my heart broken
And I won't lie
And say I walked away
Without a few cuts

But I believe in love
I believe that marriage
Is more then just a piece of paper
I believe it's forever

I know love hurts
And sometimes
It leaves marks
That may never go away

And I may be a silly young girl
Who doesn't know much about love
But I know enough
To believe it's possible love someone forever

I believe there is someone out there
Someone who is waiting for me
Just like I am waiting for them
I will find him someday

And then ill show people
That love is more then heart break
And I will love that person
Till the day my heart stops beating

Author's Note

idk if flows very well but just something that I felt like writing

Reviews

[Chelsea]

Very sweet poem! When I saw "love", I sorto groaned and thought..... Not another one! But it was unique write, not the usual cheesy stuff!
I like the questions you purpose. I'm wondering all those things myself, so it's good to know somebodies in the same boat.
I really liked your line about marrige. I agree with you, it's more than just a piece of paper. I hate nowaday how people think so little of it!
Your question on the flow. I think it sustained itself pretty well! But for each stanza I felt the last line sort of lost it?!?!
But it doesn't really matter, it was a wonderful write!

[G. K. Bostic]

Lovely ideas and hope for the future. One should always know there is hope.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

interesting....

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Life need to be slow and easy. When we waste emotions on useless people. We can't get them back. A very good ending to a outstanding poem of love and hope.
Coyote

[Cynthia]

sure it flows well! You have a nice written poem here, I love the things you believe, and the creativity! I agree with the line about marrige too! Its never just a peice of paper, the feeling should be here, thats why we marry!

[KAREN]

Excellent write and read!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

What you wrote about is excellent, the flow was great, the feelings ran deep!

[*skittlez*]

very sweet!!!!!!!! when i saw the word love i groaned and said oh no this is going to be a long poem and dumb but then i really really liked this alot and i hope you keep writing like this. i love it so sweet and kind.