He cared when no one else did

He cared when no one else did

A Poem by sarah

Your so good to me
So sweet
So kind

But I always over look you

You always make me feel good
You always make me smile
You are so good

But I always walk right on past you

You have always been there
Always with a smile on your face
You have always waited for me

But I never notice

You watched as I had my heart broken
You were there
Waiting to comfort me

But I walked to someone else

You've been around sense we were children
You have always been such a good friend
You have never disappointing me 

And yet I have never taken the time to thank you

You have cared so much for me
You have always done exactly what I needed you to do
And you simply have always been around

Your too good to me
Too sweet
Too kind

And I have never given you any reason to do so
I have never done anything to deserve any of
The kindness you have shown

Thank you
For simply being around
And caring for me

When no one else did....



© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
This guy have liked me for a REALLY long time and I wrote this for him because he is so sweet and kind, and I have never thanked him for being there when I needed him. Sorry this didn't turn out too great still suffering from writers block :-)

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A wise poem. We need to thank the people who stay with us in the good and bad times. The friends and family who love us for who we are. I like the complete poem. I try to show thankfulness for the good people in my life. In the end. I wished I thanks them more. A outstanding poem with a very good lesson to be learn.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I swear I read this! its very good! very sweet! and I think the picture is so cute!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwww, this is a sweet poem, and I just feel like hugging it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweetheart, there is nothing wrong with your writing, only minor spelling and grammar slips. Your words have great emotion and power. There are times most of us overlook someone who cares about us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wise poem. We need to thank the people who stay with us in the good and bad times. The friends and family who love us for who we are. I like the complete poem. I try to show thankfulness for the good people in my life. In the end. I wished I thanks them more. A outstanding poem with a very good lesson to be learn.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what do you mean Sarah??? This was great! Your way way to hard on your self.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
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this my friend, is your angel...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm glad you had him.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a really beautiful work to showcase one such friend, who always was there for you, not matter what. I really love this work. Its great you've one such friend. Its really amazing of you to write one such piece, and this is not called suffering from writers' block

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great poem to a great friend! Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you learned a lesson in who a true friend is , nicely written

Posted 11 Years Ago


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