My heart

My heart

A Poem by sarah

If I had to write about my heart
If I had to tell you how I truly felt
If you really wanted to know

I don't think I could tell you
Writing down my feelings
Writing down my heart
 It Can't be explained in a single piece of writing

With every poem I write
Every story I compose
Every word I speak

A part of my heart is in it
Parts of my soul
Parts of myself are put into it

I have loved and lost
I have felt joy
And I have felt pain

How can all the feelings that come with
All those experiences be explained
In one poem?

So here is a single piece of my heart
Just one thing you need to know
My heart is a sea of undiscovered things

I will spend the rest of my life
Putting my heart
Into everything I do


© 2011 sarah


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sarah
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Written with all the zeal of a true writer! Awesome work, Sarah! Just awesome! This piece flaunts the base essence of the written word. I loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very full of emotion


100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, I just loved the ending! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well this is one fine piece of a young womans heart, written so beautifully it touched me. Great poetry Sarah

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful write..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautifully stated!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this sums up your life perfectly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent beautiful work! It should win a ribon in my book!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very beautiful! i love the way you expressed the complexity of the heart. well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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