I wonder

I wonder if you felt anything

Did I break your heart?

Did you cry over me?

I wonder if I bruised you

Did I hurt you?

Did I make you angry?

I am curious to know

Did you think about me?

Did you ever wonder what I was doing?

Did you feel anything?

When I walked away?

When I screamed at you?

Did you hear me?

I wonder if you have any regret?

Did I hurt you?

Bruise you?

Cut you?

Did you feel something?

Because I did

I bled

I cried

I screamed

I felt regret

Did you.....?

Author's Note

an old poem

Reviews

[Shardbearer99]

That was really intense! There was so much empathy (I think that's the correct term?), in the poem, from the first stanza. But it caught my eye, dragged me, begged me to read more. I loved it. It was rich and vibrant, filled with emotion and so many unanswered questions about a broken heart. You have a great way at captivating the reader. Great work

[Terra]

i really like it!!

[Calypso]

I feel like sometimes too. I wonder if my ex-boyfriends ever cared.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Old or new this was written well!

[KAREN]

Strong write!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[fatalsymphonies]

It questions feeling and emotion, that's mostly what it does, but at the same time your raging curiosity makes it more interesting. I wish there were a little voice behind the set whispering the answers, though I bet you do too.

[Linear]

Yes I think maybe he would have..........great expressions along with real heartfelt emotions, Well written as always Sarah :O)

[MandaBear]

That's really good.

[guiltyascharged]

Wow. That's really good. I wish I could write something like this. Anyways, this is really good. I like it, a lot. I once thought of this, but it was targeted towards a girl more. I broke up with her for another girl I'm currently dating. Anyways, amazing write. I'd say it's one of my favorites of yours. Very deep and very good. I liked it, a lot.