Never too far gone

Never too far gone

A Poem by sarah

I can't save you
No matter how hard I try
No matter what I say
I can't save your soul

That's a choice you have to make
I can try to answer as many of your questions
As I possibly can
And believe me I will try my hardest

But nothing I say
Will save you
Nothing I do
Will make you want God in your life

That's a choice you have to make
Because it's a relationship
That's just between you
And God

I will try to set an example
I will try to help you see the truth
I will try to be there for you
No matter what path you chose

Just no matter what
I hope you know
That just because I can't save you
Doesn't mean He can't

Because no matter what happens
No matter what you do
No matter what things you chose to do
Doesn't mean you are too far gone

God will save your soul
Whether you think you deserve it or not
He will hold you in his love
Even if you try to run from him

So just because I can't save your soul
Doesn't mean he can't
Or won't....

© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I am currently talking to my cousin about Christ and I was also talking to my friend about Him the other day as well and I just wanted to write this. I don't really like talking about religion with my cousins cause we already don't have a good
relationship talking about that stuff doesn't improve it


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Religion is a touchy subject with people.
this poem was just as good as the rest of those.
from what you write about so often, you seem to lose a lot of people over it.
im sorry.
just don't forget to show love and kindness in everything you do darling. everything will be alright. :)

lots of love,

ivy

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like the message of the poem. I have deep faith in God. But I'm not religious. I'm spiritual.

The way this was written is a bit too light for a topic that talks about God and Faith and Salvation. Try writing with heavier thoughts if you want to talk about such topics. :) The poem was just too easy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good! And it's the truth! Great Job! Love it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very well written piece. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The real affection of love.. the holy soul is directly connected we all if we need or not.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written.

Sorry I'm a deeply religious man, a Christian who will never enter the gates of heaven.

And so I can't Realy review such work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have a friend that was salutation of our class, she is smart, and a good leader, but she will not accept Christ. I believe at time she thinks I'm silly to trust something that can't be seen. When ever I talk about God she acts sour and her belief of Christ has been twisted into what she wants it to be.
Your sweet to care about your cousin's soul. God is amazing, and just having him while you're alive makes life better.
Personally Sarah I believe this is the best poem you've ever written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well you are a good example. You can lead a horse to water. I really think this is the best one of your poems that I have read so far. Very good layout and read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem. You can't force people to believe if they don't want to.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh this is good, it applies to all aspects of life.
We only have the power to change ourselves
not others. Nice poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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