Someone Special

friends are for life time...

When we met

We never knew

that we would be friends,

friends forever. . 

Things change differently

than the way I thought

things are so similar

for both of us

We share a lot

We respect each other

We do the things that no else does

You makes a plan to meet at some place

I was shy to do the same.

We do all the things in similar ways

don't know why.

You makes me Smile

Smile for no reason

For the past few days

things are going in a different way

I don't know what is going on in your

mind about me.

All I know is I'm happy. . . 

Author's Note

tell me what do you think about this...review this..

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

First I will be the grumpy editor, then the sugar to help the medicine go down.
First Stanza, third line: replace "gonna" with "would"
Second stanza,second line: change "as" to "than"
Third stanza, the final word should be "does"
Fifth stanza, first line: try "We do all things in similar ways"
There, now that I have gotten over my grammar grumpies, your poem is an absolute delight, a wonderful work of Frienship. Your poem makes me happy.

[Sarmelendez]

this is such a good write:) I enjoyed it very much "You makes me Smile
Smile for no reason" this is one of my favorite lines.

thank you for sharing

Sarah :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for liking it! :)

[Saumya]

A really lovely and sweet poem for "someone special"..
a wonderful flow of those really great words which perfectly defines a beyond wonderful friend:)
i agree, nothing can be better than being in a company of a good friend:)

and yes i could completely relate with these lines:
When we met
We never knew
that we would be friends,
friends forever. .
this was exactly the same as happened with me and my best, and first friend since school, we were the ones called 'great enemies" but later situations changed, and i helped her at a moment when she needed someone to help, and since then we are 'best friends" :)

completely enjoyed reading:)

a delightful read and write:)
well done:)

[Akshat♥]

Thanks for sharing your life a bit :)
Am more than glad to know that you liked this piece of mine :)

[Saumya]

not a problem:) you r welcmd:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Lovely poem about someone special in your life and the good times you share. Pronoun issue.. She to You.. Her to Your.. good job.

[Akshat♥]

Okay! I am correcting it right away :D
Thank you dear :)

[Prritiy]

its sweet

[Akshat♥]

I would love it more if you have expressed it more like you likes and dislikes..
any changes if possible :P
by the way sweet like? :D
Thank you dear :)

[Prritiy]

it has been edited grammatically already :)
sweet in a sense of innocence.... :)

[Akshat♥]

I mean "express"...you didn't get it...no prob.
Thank you :)

[Prritiy]

Akshat its not always that one can express in many words, i am bit shy in that as i feel i am still learning :)

[Akshat♥]

lol...write anything u feel like...i really appreciate your efforts..
please dont feel shy especially with me :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Akshat♥]

oops :P

[Lily Finch]

nice :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[beautiful life]

Nice

[Akshat♥]

:)

[Anuvart]

someone special is so important in everyone's life..
it gives you strength within :)

[Hitman]

feelings are so true!!

[sudeshna]

honest feelings...

[Little Abbey]

Very nice poem! :) Simple, but sweet.