Someone Special

friends are for life time...

When we met

We never knew

that we would be friends,

friends forever. . 

Things change differently

than the way I thought

things are so similar

for both of us

We share a lot

We respect each other

We do the things that no else does

You makes a plan to meet at some place

I was shy to do the same.

We do all the things in similar ways

don't know why.

You makes me Smile

Smile for no reason

For the past few days

things are going in a different way

I don't know what is going on in your

mind about me.

All I know is I'm happy. . . 

Author's Note

tell me what do you think about this...review this..

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

First I will be the grumpy editor, then the sugar to help the medicine go down.
First Stanza, third line: replace "gonna" with "would"
Second stanza,second line: change "as" to "than"
Third stanza, the final word should be "does"
Fifth stanza, first line: try "We do all things in similar ways"
There, now that I have gotten over my grammar grumpies, your poem is an absolute delight, a wonderful work of Frienship. Your poem makes me happy.

[Nat.]

This is very good and touching i think i know what you are talking about, maybe? It makes me feel like i'm reading from the point of view of a young shy child. :)

[Star Wolf]

I love it, its happy and rather romantic. Very fun.

[northern monkey]

Uplifting. Child-like yet profound. Great work Akshat.

[.shalynn.009.]

"I don't know what is going on in her
mind about me." I love that you included this. Though the speaker is best friends with this person, she still doesn't know exactly what she thinks. But that doesn't stop them from being best friends. People don't have to be exactly the same to be friends.

I like that there is almost a romantic undertone to this, almost like the two are lovers, yet it still retains that innocence of friendship. It really emphasized that they are best friends, and how much closer they are than just casual friends. And, of course, your use of coloring certain words and adding that special emphasis is always very effective.

Another good poem from you. It's been a while since I have received an RR from you. It was a pleasure to return to your work. Keep writing and keep sending them my way.

[Lime-Eater]

This is very good, sweet, and happy makeing! :) Great Job! :)

[Art]

nice work on this poem...

[Ashley Myers]

awww its so sweet and so innocent. its not lustful or anything like that. theres a lot of lust on this site but not many innocent poems like this. its adorable i love it

[Nyida Strong]

I find that few poems are about friendship without them being about betrayal as well. I find myself feeling jealous of you, for having such a pure friendship. :)

N. Strong

[Chris38]

I found this enchanting. So few poems are of friendship

[Angela]

See below. and a very sweet write.