Someone Special

Someone Special

A Poem by Akshat♥
"

friends are for life time...

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When we met
We never knew
that we would be friends,
friends forever. . 

Things change differently
than the way I thought
things are so similar
for both of us

We share a lot
We respect each other
We do the things that no else does

You makes a plan to meet at some place
I was shy to do the same.

We do all the things in similar ways
don't know why.

You makes me Smile
Smile for no reason

For the past few days
things are going in a different way

I don't know what is going on in your
mind about me.

All I know is I'm happy. . . 

© 2013 Akshat♥


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Akshat♥
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First I will be the grumpy editor, then the sugar to help the medicine go down.
First Stanza, third line: replace "gonna" with "would"
Second stanza,second line: change "as" to "than"
Third stanza, the final word should be "does"
Fifth stanza, first line: try "We do all things in similar ways"
There, now that I have gotten over my grammar grumpies, your poem is an absolute delight, a wonderful work of Frienship. Your poem makes me happy.

Posted 13 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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Another cute little poem. love it :)m. love it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think someone's in like

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very sweet and uplifting

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem... Simple and Sweet.. It is the lil smiles that make laughter..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a nice sweet poem.
I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And sometimes, that is all we need! Lovely work love! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bro, you have written my friendship story, i am facing the same problem...
Nice..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the picture! If you actually own that stuffed monster I envy you (:
Okay with that out of the way great job! I loved it! But you should listen to Geralyn Miller. I'm not a grammar nazi but it would flow a lot better if you took her suggestions! Just saying (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the upbeat positive note to this piece XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a very great poem about friendship... thanks for sharing this... this poem really reminds me of my friends... this poem made me long for them even more...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshat♥
Akshat♥

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