Someone Special

friends are for life time...

When we met

We never knew

that we would be friends,

friends forever. . 

Things change differently

than the way I thought

things are so similar

for both of us

We share a lot

We respect each other

We do the things that no else does

You makes a plan to meet at some place

I was shy to do the same.

We do all the things in similar ways

don't know why.

You makes me Smile

Smile for no reason

For the past few days

things are going in a different way

I don't know what is going on in your

mind about me.

All I know is I'm happy. . . 

Author's Note

tell me what do you think about this...review this..

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

First I will be the grumpy editor, then the sugar to help the medicine go down.
First Stanza, third line: replace "gonna" with "would"
Second stanza,second line: change "as" to "than"
Third stanza, the final word should be "does"
Fifth stanza, first line: try "We do all things in similar ways"
There, now that I have gotten over my grammar grumpies, your poem is an absolute delight, a wonderful work of Frienship. Your poem makes me happy.

[jay-lyse]

Friends I think are what is needed to enjoy life, through the good and the bad they'll always be there. Great Write!!!

[Short.Nerd]

Love the picture and the poem! This was an excellent write! Great job and keep up the good work:)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

Friends . . . What would we do without them?
This poem made me smile. :)

[Shardbearer99]

As with everything in life, things can taken an unexpected turn. Whether for the good, or the bad is another question entirely. I met a friend when I started secondary school one year, but then things just turned for the worst. And it became a very lonely, up-setting place for me. I was never really that popular, so it kind of sucked. But I liked how you were able to create a strong, believable sense of true friendship. It's something to love and cherish. Wonderful writing

[Katseye]

I read it after a revise... It's wonderfull. Perfectly describes what friendship should be about.

[howlfjdks]

I appreciate your kind breakdown on how a friend helps the world go round.

[Hello, Goodbye]

Im sure at one time or another we have all shared these feelings..

[Cassandra D.]

this was really cute!
I loved the ending, "All I know is I'm Happy" such a beautiful yet simple way to end this poem. very good!

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. Kat24