Someone Special

friends are for life time...

When we met

We never knew

that we would be friends,

friends forever. . 

Things change differently

than the way I thought

things are so similar

for both of us

We share a lot

We respect each other

We do the things that no else does

You makes a plan to meet at some place

I was shy to do the same.

We do all the things in similar ways

don't know why.

You makes me Smile

Smile for no reason

For the past few days

things are going in a different way

I don't know what is going on in your

mind about me.

All I know is I'm happy. . . 

Author's Note

tell me what do you think about this...review this..

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

First I will be the grumpy editor, then the sugar to help the medicine go down.
First Stanza, third line: replace "gonna" with "would"
Second stanza,second line: change "as" to "than"
Third stanza, the final word should be "does"
Fifth stanza, first line: try "We do all things in similar ways"
There, now that I have gotten over my grammar grumpies, your poem is an absolute delight, a wonderful work of Frienship. Your poem makes me happy.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

I noticed some grammar or spelling or wrong tense of words..It could be that you were doing that for a reason..I enjoyed reading the work about clicking with another human being on levels of friendship and more..Sunflower

[Akshat♥]

try telling me the mistakes...i will try to correct it:)

[White Ink]

yup just like what has been said already, fix your lil mistakes n you'll have a sweet poem :) keep it up!

[Jazique]

Its was good. You may want to fix the word friend at the beginning and do some punctuation but, other then that it was a wonderful friendship type poem. The descriptions and feelings just cam together into your own friendly work of art so bravo!

[LA Lorena]

Cute sentiments, a very sweet poem. There are some spelling errors and a few areas of problems with grammar, but a nice attempt. I assume that English is not your first language, is this correct?

[sushi]

Truly, BEST FRIENDS.....

[Siddhartha]

innocent and full of charm...first love really is wonderful...
P.S.-Some corrections-Similar is spelled wrongly and some other minor aberrations...other than that it's perfect...

[M.Babu]

This was very cute. Touching and shy.
Just as it should be.
My review: Good