Someone Special

friends are for life time...

When we met

We never knew

that we would be friends,

friends forever. . 

Things change differently

than the way I thought

things are so similar

for both of us

We share a lot

We respect each other

We do the things that no else does

You makes a plan to meet at some place

I was shy to do the same.

We do all the things in similar ways

don't know why.

You makes me Smile

Smile for no reason

For the past few days

things are going in a different way

I don't know what is going on in your

mind about me.

All I know is I'm happy. . . 

Author's Note

tell me what do you think about this...review this..

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

First I will be the grumpy editor, then the sugar to help the medicine go down.
First Stanza, third line: replace "gonna" with "would"
Second stanza,second line: change "as" to "than"
Third stanza, the final word should be "does"
Fifth stanza, first line: try "We do all things in similar ways"
There, now that I have gotten over my grammar grumpies, your poem is an absolute delight, a wonderful work of Frienship. Your poem makes me happy.

[sarah]

Wow this wins best poem of the day award great write!

[Brook Hughes]

This poem made my day. I love the pic! The colors really bring out the mood and portray it in an awesome way. Keep writing!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wow..!!!

Lovely write..!! This cute picture has enhanced the value of this write-up..!!!!

KEEP SHARING..!!!

[DarkAspen]

This is a very well formed poem. It has a loud voice and a tariffic flow. Good job and keep up the amazing work!

[Brad]

you know, if they make you happy...that's the only thing that matters because life is too short

[JENY]

wow...
there seems to be a peculiar....
yet sweet relationship exist between you and the person whom you love....
it is very cute......
liked the poem...very much...

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I like it. It flows nicely, and it's a good poem. I'm to tireed to realy think apout it know :P But I do like it!!

[Coyote Poetry]

We need good friends to make us happy. I like the story in the poem. Friendship is like diamonds in a life. Precious and we need to appreciate our friends who hang around us in the good and bad times. A very good ending to a outstanding poem, Thank you.
Coyote

[Valentine]

My mom always ssaid..happiness comes in pebbles...not in boulders..Kathie

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

thats an awesome poem :)