YET...

YET...

A Poem by SAGAR
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Yet...

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YET..

When will I see you…
Minutes seems like hours
Even days seems like years
You promised to take me along
Let me see you..
My eyes wish to be where they belong

When will I hear you…
Everyone with whom I converse
My mirror my friend with whom I rehearse
Your voice echoes the four walls
Let me hear you..
I truly wish to be near all your calls

When will I meet you…
Beginning to follow each shadow
Pleading the moon to light up the meadow
My heart my soul stopping to search
Let me meet you..
I want to be with you until endarch

When will I write you…
The journey the path we traversed together
Volcano storm bypassed scores of weather
Each alphabet that my soul breathe to survive
Let me write you..
I swear it will be a sojourn worth seven lives

I have seen you
I have heard you
I have met you
I have to write you..YET..

© 2014 SAGAR


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The poem is very good.
"When will I write you…
The journey the path we traversed together
Volcano storm bypassed scores of weather
Each alphabet that my soul breathe to survive
Let me write you..
I swear it will be a sojourn worth seven lives"
I like the above lines a lot. Words written for new friends and old. Are remembered forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the noble words used. I certainly appreciate them.



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this is extremely good! i love everything About this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot....
I love this poem, especially the emotions in this stunning piece of art. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for feelings the emotions in the poem and resonating with them....
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
I swear ir will be a sojourn worth seven lives. These are deep words...lovely words! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Thanks for finding the depth in the few words that resonate with the poem....
The poem is very good.
"When will I write you…
The journey the path we traversed together
Volcano storm bypassed scores of weather
Each alphabet that my soul breathe to survive
Let me write you..
I swear it will be a sojourn worth seven lives"
I like the above lines a lot. Words written for new friends and old. Are remembered forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the noble words used. I certainly appreciate them.
"My mirror my friend with whom I rehearse" lovely. Nicely constructed, pleasing to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the encouragement...
a wonderful poem of yearning, something we all experience and can all relate to. great job x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the kind words....
This poem is amazing. You have described love so closely and gently with all the details. It is a lovely poem. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SAGAR

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the encouraging words and the read....

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SAGAR
SAGAR

Amritsar, Punjab, India



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A Poem by SAGAR


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A Poem by SAGAR