ramadan

ramadan

A Poem by samaveiled

his house is scented with sumac and henna...
vermilion isnt an option here...
with an aching stomach, the moon tells my suffering when to cease
while five times a day
i fall to my knees
heavy under the realization that i am so small.
with palms to the sky
i release my dreams,
and beg forgiveness.

there is an inspiration to breath
in the immaculate line of dawn
just as catharsis is carried,
while the moon rises
and the sun falls.

this air is so heavy with tests
and i feel my aural muscles stretch
finally
even that ache is a step back into myself
and into my future
i shall tie stones round my stomach
and grow gaunt for my faith
knowing i am strong...

© 2009 samaveiled


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im a muslim, it is about ramadan. thank you very much. i am an american actually, born and raised...but east has a heavy influence on me...

Posted 14 Years Ago


hey its good i like it, are u some kind of middle eastern cuz of the sumac and henna part I LOVE those 2 things

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g91YGe5ouqs

Posted 14 Years Ago



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