She...

A poem about a certain person in my life...

She's never sorry

She never thanks you

She never loved me

She says she hates you

She causes problems

She says I'm to blame

She manipulates me

She make my life a game

She thinks she's winning

She really is

She wants to beat me

She's not better than this

She's a demon

She's disguised with a halo

She fools me sometimes and then

She'll raise hell, once again I know

She uses me as her scapegoat

She'll feed people lies

She wears a righteous coat

She has evil red eyes

And no matter what she does we still think she's an angel

Flying her way through heaven with no fear nor obstacle

And she'll make it her way

But only because deep down she's evil scum and is counting the days till i lay.

Reviews

[Tennessee]

Nice. I know some b*****s like this and this is a great way to describe them. Good work i really liked it. Straight forward and honest.

[Miranda Richard]

This is amazing! The rhythm of this poem is very nice, I think you'll become a wonderful writer :)

[K.]

I really, really liked it! It was very interesting to read and I really enjoyed it! This is just a personal issue but I think the only thing that would make this a really good poem is to change the 'evil scum' part in the last line. I just think that it kind of adds a voice that doesn't really match the tone of the rest of the poem. Good work though :)

[Dreamer]

very enjoyable read! I liked it a lot... very well done Sammy (: