My Paradise

Also written in 2004

Sunshine brushes my face

 

Taking me away to a dream like place

 

Stars dance, sparkling in the night

 

Surrounding the moon, specks of light

 

The fresh breeze is rolling through my skin

 

I love the place I’m speaking of, this place within

 

It’s a place with no darkness, no evil is abound

 

In day brightened by rays, at night the moonlight flooding my body all around it smells

 

clean, not clogged by the filth of lies

 

When people come, they leave with friendly goodbyes

 

This is the place I dream to be

 

Close your eyes, believe, you’ll see

 

This is my world, the one in my head

 

Just dream your own place, like the ones you have read

 

Reviews

[Penny Dreadful]

just reading this sent me to a "dream world"

wonderful xxxx

[Shugotenshi1692]

you spoke the truth. more people should be like you and tell it how it is!

[SilentOrchestra]

Interestingly expressed and very vivid description. Amazing poem. A pleasure to read.