What A Beautiful Suicide

What a beautiful suicide,
The night skies so dark,
The stars shine brightly,
Tonight I'll make my mark.

 

What a beautiful suicide,
With a knife next to me,
Alone in my room,
How good shall this be.

 

What a beautiful suicide,
I'd already planned,
Alone in silence,
Nothing could be more grand.

 

What a beautiful suicide,
I don't think I could die,
Come to think of it,
it shall make others cry.

 

What a beautiful suicide,
I'll no longer commit,
I will just mend what is wrong,
I was stupid I admit.

 

 

Reviews

[XxtaintedxX]

I love this, it's very interesting how the whole thing turns around(:

[Spookers]

It sounds like you talk from experience. That means that your emotions are in. I enjoyed it very much

[Jill Wallflower]

Aww Jay, this is amazing!

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

this is amazing i luvv it:)

[BeatricePortinari.]

Beautiful. But what makes it beautiful is that it came from somewhere inside you. Something you needed to express, and those are the best. The only bad poetry is empty poetry and this is far from it. Wonderful job, message me if you need something(:

[NeonWolves]

I love it. Its truthful and I have been there too. With a knife and pills both at seperate times..I have the scars to haunt me.
Great Job.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

I love it! I can actually connect with this one. i really really love it good job. :)

[Manda]

Beautiful! Dark! Truthful! I know this.... Only it wasnt a knife that almost ended my life, but pills... I too was stupid and will admit to it... Its always comforting to know your not alone!

Great Job
Manda

[Krisen Lison]

Wow, this is a great piece it's very well written and tells a very true story for many.

[Roxie Demonia]

i like it. its how i feel sometimes. i like the darnkness of it.