Rhythms of Solitude

It speaks about one's despair after being used because he/she loved his/her partner.

To the dancing rhythms of despair ,
 To the transient melodies of happiness,
 Love seemed to be the only feeling of myself
 Was it a life they speak about every single day?
 A feeling so untrue, so destructive and so vulnerable
A feeling of uniqueness and perfection
 no words; left me in the dungeons of cherish
  to just speak about the air of despondency within
 yet, I speak about the feelings I dream of in-
 silent, persuasive nights, drenched in the spirit of solitude
                                                            

                                                           Innocent as was the feeling, so was the exploit
                                                            the gain?? Some aspirations long awaited.
                                                            Still I ran after your afterglow,your true feelings
                                                             your kinds words and true self,
                                                             Vain was all the consequence, buried deeper and deeper..........      

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Bittersweet and breathtaking, a very lovely read....enjoyed.

[Sandipan Majhi]

thank you very much dear.... :).... it really feels good that you enjoyed it

[Frieda P]

Very much so, my pleasure :-)

[Blood Ink Diary]

Ah, such a breath-taking poem ! How certain experiences delve in us mortals for a long time -- this poem caresses the heart with a sense of melancholy and bliss - oh I am sounding paradoxical now?! lol

Lovely verse, dear Sandipan !

[Sandipan Majhi]

ohh no no sometimes what seems to be paradoxial must have some breathtaking explanations...sometimes paradox is a beauty because we feel it maybe quite often. ... Thank u dear for your precious time u gave to my poem

[Blood Ink Diary]

'tis my pleasure, to have come across your writing ! Keep penning. Cheers

[The Girl Who Loved Too ..]

So very beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.

[Sandipan Majhi]

thank you very much !!! :)

[Brook]

Beautiful poem!
Nicely done.

[Sandipan Majhi]

nice to hear that !!!