Solitude

Amidst people of several kinds

Between various colors of life

Confines within each one of us

Deep down our hearts and minds

Eternally possessed gratitude

Fondly known as solitude

Gifted by the almighty

Hopefulness it pertains within

Inner peace being its synonym

Justice to soul it does

Kindles a ray of hope inside

Loneliness being its company

Mingles ones’ soul to God

Never does it leave ones’ side

Offers a life without ego

Portraying a better personality

Solitude thus defines one’s singularity

Toughening ones’ self from within...

Author's Note

its my first attempt to write something in this pattern.. all suggestions are most welcome

Reviews

[Solar]

A soulful poem and this is a wonderful line 'Inner peace being its synonym'.

[sansrity sinha]

Thank you so much!

[Gaurav]

Nice attempt with poetic experimentation and it succeeded. Thanks for sharing :)

[sansrity sinha]

Thak you so much! :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

only poets can even make solitude and loneliness look so beautiful through words... good write Sansrity

[Krizito]

It's a great poem with a powerful and clear message. But I do feel it could with a bit of punctuation, reading through it all with no breaks took quite a bit of effort on my part. But nice job all the same.

[sansrity sinha]

thanks for reviewing it. I would ensure I write better :)