Pseudo twin

Pseudo twin

A Poem by sansrity sinha

From similar faces to similar thoughts;

Similar mischief to similar punishments!

Everything was always similar;

Except few habits that made us different!!


I miss those days of endless fun,

Missing buses to losing school bags!

You have always been my partner in crime;

A true friend, A lovely sis!!


As our looks made us being called twins!

It also made you make stories of me being your sis!!

From my first hilarious haircut,

To painful nails you had cut for me!


From catching butterflies in school gardens;

To playing around after missing bus!!

You are always in my memories…


A cute little kid to drop dead gorgeous;

Not just my first friend of life;

But indeed as a pseudo twin!!

© 2016 sansrity sinha


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Hello sansrity sinha,

I love the sentiment behind your words. Twins would have a special bond beyond what most of us can only dream of having with a sibling or sibling-like friend.

Some of your wording appeared a bit awkward and I was wondering if you did this on purpose? For instance, the line: As our looks made us being called twins! It's a beautiful line but the word "being" seems awkward here. Just a thought but otherwise, it's a great poem. Keep up the great work!

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi



Posted 3 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

Hi,
Actually i wrote this for one of my very close friends who looks very similar to me..we h.. read more
Schatzi

3 Years Ago

Isn't it amazing when we find that special connection with another person, especially one where ther.. read more
sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

Yup! Few relations are as strong and deep as blood relations:)
sweet! lovely write!
keep writing :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

thank you so much! :)

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Added on July 6, 2016
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