friend

 i see you smile at me

nothing but as a friend

never anything more

i feel our hands clasp together

wanting you to be around me

waiting for that text

i feel the warmth of your hand against mine

i want the warmth of you to fill my cold-ness

i want this waterfall to stop coming out of my eyes

i say " i love you"

wishing i could take it back

the butterflies explode all around me when you say

" I cant.."

Reviews

[barricade]

"i want this waterfall to stop coming out of my eyes
i say " i love you"
wishing i could take it back
the butterflies explode all around me when you say
" I cant.."

this is so relatable...can completely understand how this feels...you've expressed it so beautifully...the love, the tears, the warmth and the aches!!! nothing but reality...straight from the heart...can feel those tears all over this write...

Loved it!
great work...keep it up!

regards
Barricade...

[Catastrophe]

i say " i love you"
wishing i could take it back
the butterflies explode all around me when you say
" I cant.." Those lines killed me... It was good piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Its sad; a lot sadder because my heart can painfully relate..all in all it was a good read.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a tender, beautiful, bittersweet write, moving softly, sweetly, then piercing so deep to the heart... brilliant...

[Nish Nish the Fish]

holy s**t sar...
i agree with this "king of cards"
it sure is a total wake up call at the end.

insanely creative way of putting down your feelings!

[Pimpinella]

wow. this poem is a one two punch. the ending is just....amazing. really really nice piece here