Being Me

why do we do the things we do?

Sometimes I feel like i'm a bad person.

Negative thoughts.

Doing wrong here and there.

Is there something wrong with me?

I guess I'll never really know.

I think that there's something wrong with me.

I guess this is all just apart of only being human though..

Reviews

[Blue]

A lot of people can relate to this introspection. It's a sign of awareness of self and of life. I like the ending line which concluded the sentiments in a somewhat positive way. However, we should make it a reason for us to forgive ourselves, not an excuse for us to continue doing wrong. I think we should rise above our human level and strive reach our divine potentials.

[ayele marie dalmeida]

I ask myself this questions most of the time too . Nicely written :D

[Jeannear]

I felt the same way to.....great poem its just life

[TL Boehm]

Yup all part of being human. I concur. Wise writing.

[00000000000000000000000..]

I think we all have said and felt something as you speak at one point or another.

[Trace]

Nothing wrong with you.
you are just as normal as the next poet.

Oops. Did I say that. Lol
we question what's right and wrong all the time
then we just write something naughty and feel much better.

Trace

[ayele marie dalmeida]

this poem really spoke to me . honestly. i feel like this a lot of time and i ask myself this questions too. all i have to say with this piece is: bravo :)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much im glad you liked it !

[ayele marie dalmeida]

I'm glad i read it :)

[MAC]

nicely written Sarah and I so agree

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you ! Im glad you agree with this !

[MAC]

you are welcome :)

[David]

couldn't have said it better myself lol great job

[MichaelsLyric.com]

I like you last line, it is completely true. Nice piece. Thank you for sharing.