(Your Name Here)

(Your Name Here)

A Poem by saratogaparty

(Your Name Here):

 

Hey,

stop that.

What are you

Doing messing around up there

In my tired mind? You’re scratching

The new upholstery

Tossing around folders erratically

The ones that assist me in remembering

Why it is you’re mad as hell and

Why it is

My face is in my hands again and

I’m sorry.

© 2013 saratogaparty


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cool :) I like this one very much :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


saratogaparty

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Inventive. Always a certain lapidary dignity and elegance in your engraveing.I
wish I could sit at your knee and watch you carve on stone.

Your name here.
dana

Posted 11 Years Ago


saratogaparty

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Dana.

You may have to keep me to carve first, but i'd be honored to have you ar.. read more
I'm an interior decorator by unofficial trade
I'd be happy to do some blindfolded consultation
just make sure the oils on your face are complimentary to the walls

p.s. brilliant writing...I just figured I'd leave you to sort your laundry rather than fawn over it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

11 Years Ago

you are now on the zen path; my work is done here
saratogaparty

11 Years Ago

Now I'll just have to work on motorcycle maintenance.
Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander

11 Years Ago

I'll handle "the art of" section of the essay, I suppose...gotta brush up on my castanada and way of.. read more

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Added on February 24, 2013
Last Updated on February 24, 2013
Tags: relationships, poetry, nostalgia, dirt

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saratogaparty
saratogaparty

Los Angeles, CA



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