self hatred

I don't deserve to live,

have nothing more to give

I really deserve to die

I didn't even try

to do something worthy

Do I deserve a blessing

I am just nothing ,

stupid & unworthy

No one ever felt

how heavy is the guilt

I always had to carry

I don't deserve a friend

Our friendship shall end

I made your days gloomy,

& wasn't trustworthy

I don't deserve success

sorry I must confess

this poem is just a mess

It is not noteworthy 

Author's Note

please tell me your opinion honestly , It means a lot to me

Reviews

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its really strong and sharp words. sometimes i wrote staff like this. if i can ask you what is reason. you don t deserve love, friendship, . why you deserve die. why you think you are stupid. i think everybody are great person and they deserve to be loved . and i am sure you great person too. i dont review artistic meaning. for me is more important message what people want to say. i am sorry if i hurt you. by my review. i wish you happy days full of light and hope. BLIXA

[sarah48]

Thank you very much for your kind review . It really means a lot to me . you didn't hurt me at all . I am just depressed so I tried to write about it . I hope that writing will make me feel better.

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all right i am glade there is no any harm . i just when i read it feel there is no any hope. but how i mentoined. sometimes i write simulate staff. i will you will be better best luck at your life
BLIXA

[Karmel]

Sarah, I really enjoyed your piece, you are a very talented poet.

I'm sorry to read in you comments that you have been feeling depressed lately. I hope things get better for you, and writing is helping. Everyone experiences, at some point or another, a time in their life where everything that lies broken, seems unfixable. Ultimately it is up to you to break these thoughts, and produce something positive. With a little work, and a creative mind like yours, it will be a very achievable task to turn your situation into something, with great reward at the end. Use your experiences to conceive something beautiful! And please keep writing poetry, your work is very effective in telling your story!!