Dream part 2

A dream for all

Please do  not try to be obstacle on my way

Because I will cross it without caring anyway

Just let me live

Just let me live

Let me motivate if you can

Let me shine as the sun can

Let me blow as the wind can

Say me,I am with you,if you are against also

Because I don’t care what all you thought

Let me flow as the water can

Let me fly as the bird can

And ask,whatever you can

I will give you my life also

If you want

But the tone must be sweet

If you can,if you can

Author's Note

again,Kindly ignore grammer
I just continued it
Dream part 2

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is seeking and reaching new places and dreams.
"Let me flow as the water can
Let me fly as the bird can"
I told my children. Travel, test life and have fun before you get old. Freedom is under-rated. Thank you sarik for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Shah Sabia]

The flow of the poem is magical, could be better if you make the grammar perfect.
Keep it up :)

[sarik]

ooh thanks a lot for this..

and yes i am working on my grammar....

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Very nice attempt.
The plot soars with the urge for freedom.
But would have worked as wonders if the grammar errors would have been in an acceptable range.
Sorry can't ignore it.
Nice try.

[sarik]

you-really-deserb-a-thanku coz-u-realize-me-my-mistake,and-i-am-working-hard-on-it
may-be-on-my-next-work-you-will-find-none

[Sanjukta Sen Banerjee]

The message is strong but barriers of language is killing a good part of it.One thing you have to take note of is avoiding direct word ny word translation of your thought from its indian language articulation, because the rules of construction of sentences are completely different in English aa compared to indian languages especially the north and was indian ones

[sarik]

okey.
and again thanx a lot