in extremis

destruction.. love continue..

                                       in extremis

Avi Na-khus hu, kahi behak  na jao

Smbhalo mujhe apni yaad se khalis

Soch kr tumhe khil uth-ta hu mai

Jaise hu koi gulab  khalis

Na aao baar baar yu khayalo me meri

Kahi pagal na krde teri ye addat khalis...

 

continue...

Author's Note

A phase from hindi poetry

Reviews

[FaeryQueen]

great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[sarik]

thank you Miss Khatoon

[FaeryQueen]

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[Jyoti_Ablaze]

A passionate poetic write.
Depth held the beauty of words.
Enjoyed the imagery!
Kudos!

[sarik]

glad you enjoyed J

bt am sad jyoti !! as I am still waiting to know that whether the next phrase of Hum The was liked or not

hope you remember..

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh yeah. Sorry about that, slipped my notice.
Yes it was a beautiful extension! Very well written! Thanx.

[sarik]

its fine...

and trust me am happy

at least I can add some beautiful lines on someone thoughts if needed