Ask Your Heart...

easiest way to deal with life..

When nothing goes well in life,
and, you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and, ask yourself, why..?

When you have done,
everything, you could do,
and still feel, deprived,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

When everything you planned,
went totally wrong,
and you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

When all you thought,
did no more last,
and you don't know, why,
just take, a deep sigh,
sit, and ask your heart, why..?

Heart, you know, is a gift from God,
to all those beings,who want to last...

He gave us, body, and  soul,
but gave the heart,
to make these pure.....

The thoughts, and advices,
which arises in your heart,
are the words,
directly from God..!!

So, always listen,
to your heart,
because, its the best gift,
to you, from, God..

Trust it,
Hear it,
follow it,
and, you'll be, your best friend in need..
and, moreover,
A great, Human being indeed...!

Author's Note

pleeeeeeease give your reviews , and,i request this to every reader
and it would be great, if you could also rate it....!!

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This is a poem with a wise message. If could use a little more rhythm. I wrote two verses that you may keep for your self to show you what I mean by more rhythm. I overlapped the rhyme using a seven syllable line followed by a five syllable line where all accents match in meter. This may be sung as a song:

Heart

When there's trouble in your life
just take a deep sigh.
Medication for your strife
may be found nearby.

Your best guide is deep inside,
an eternal tie,
where no truths may ever hide.
Just ask your heart why.

[Angel]

Very well said. I agree with Caradoc...too many commas. All that punctuation takes away from the beauty of the message.
I like the way he compares too much punctuation with salt on french fries...a little is good...but too much ruins the taste.

[ba_mcfarlane]

this is a great advocacy for self esteem.

[BlackRose]

Superb piece. Loved it. We gods gift and children. We should be thankful for everyday we get to keep on living.

[sanya]

it is the best poem ever love it.........................

[Patrick O'Neil]

True, the heart knows many things, but sometimes what it knows is not what we want to hear. Great write.

[Caradoc]

It's a good poem with a good message. Although, I do have to say that there are a ton of commas in it. I liken it to salt on french fries. Sometimes the person who salts them gets a little too happy, or angry, with the shaker.

Still, it's a good message.

-Cara

[Dana Alsamsam]

lovely message here, your intentions are lovely!

[Avinash]

Reminds me of the Alchemist .. :)

[s y e]

Awesome job!

~ Noodle

[Onku Ghosh]

Good work indeed !!!lovely message. keep it up.