If You...

If you  want to be something,
be like a TREE,
which is always.....GIVING

If you want to be something,
be like a FLOWER,
which is always........SMILING

If you want to be something,
be like a FOUNTAIN,
which is always...........CONSISTENTLY TOILING

If you want to be something,
be like a COOL BREEZE
which is always..........PLEASING and SOOTHING

If you want to be something,
be like a great FABLE
which is always..........INTERESTING

If you want to be something,
be like a STAR
which is always..............SHINING

If you want to be something,
be like SKY
which is always.............WITHOUT ENDING

If you want to be something,
be like an ANGEL from God
which is always..............FORGIVING, LOVING, and BLESSING

But yes, my friends,
if you want to be one of these,
which i had been mentioning......

you first need, to be a good
human being...
who is really essential, to
make the atmosphere
around........
serene

so make your world,
something really amazing,
by .......supplying it with great meanings.
from your surroundings.

and be the change,
you and your heart,
had always been ...dreaming..!!

Author's Note

thanks a lot for reading...!!
i will be rally grateful, if you review and rate it..!!
regards
saumya

Reviews

[annie lee]

Again your faith shines through. The analogies (I think I've chosen the right word) are precise and instantly visual -- all symbols available to everyone and thus easy to mimic the benign influences. Your use of colored text keeps the reader's eye interested. Your gentle spirituality should be bottled and distributed worldwide. The last stanzas sweep the reader up into the thrilling realization that the answer is to change, to be part of the change. Inspirational for any religion and inspirational for a free spirit.

[Mark]

very nice! It is always good to be reminded of what sort of human we want to be. :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

wonderful message... the final stanza really makes one self reflect.

[Frieda P]

Very uplifting and great message here, got a bit too preachy for me towards the center imho, but I still enjoyed it!

[s y e]

A lovely message, loved all the colours. Awesome job, as always.

Loved the message portrayed.

~ Noodle.

[Traci]

A very inspiring piece, with uplifting messages.

you first need, to be a good
human being...
who is really essential, to
make the atmosphere
around........
serene

Very well done, look forward to reading more of your work.

[Dr. Wood ?]

you are by far the most positive writer.....I always enjoy your exuberance. and wish you many years of happiness in your writing

[quinfinn]

inspiring words, my dear. very nicely penned!

[NA]

Beautiful read...enjoyed :)

[Rita L. Sev]

A happy, positive poem - I love your uplifting messages, Saumya!

[Roopal]

Your poetry always oozes of positive vibes. The message, the philosophy are all so pure.

"and be the change,
you and your heart,
had always been ...dreaming.."

Reminds me of Gandhi. Keep writing, keep polishing your pieces. It is always pleasant to read your write ups. Good luck. :)