The People Around..

The People Around..

A Poem by Saumya
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This is a poem, which consists the description of the variety types of people we are surrounded with....

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Have you keenly seen the people around..?
producing diverse effects
on your life's canvas
each and every moment,
with the advent of time.......

Some of them, are
like the cool breeze,
filling us each time,
with optimism and peace..

Some of them, are
like the grand trees,
ever ready to fill us
with their shade and peace....

Some of them, are
like the lovely flowers,
who always turn your sad face
into a smiling flower....

Some of them, are
like the little colorful birds,
who meet you only at times
but make those moments
truly hopeful and divine.......

Some of them, are
like those grand storms,
who cannot and never be judged,
by any norms...
giving sadness in different forms.....

Some of them, are
like those melodious songs
having their own zeal and charm.......

And, some of them,
cannot be really defined,
irritating at times,
interesting the other times...
optimistic at one time,
and a big sadist the other times.......
and this is why its always hard,
to perceive them every time......!

But whats really amazing here's, that
they all leave some, or the other
impact on us each time.....
So love, respect, and enjoy,
everyone's presence around you each time,
Because, we don't ever know,
that what would their existence teach us one time,
and then this same world,
looks really fine..!



© 2013 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all really enjoyed reading this......
pleaseeee review and rate it.....and its my request to everyone....!!!
regards
saumya

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i am touched and enlightened by your positive vibes here, and i think you create a spark of hope that we all understand one another as sentient, feeling human beings. we are always so quick to judge and/or fear what we don't understand and rather than embrace our hurt feelings or fears we lash out in anger or self defense. i know that i am just as guilty as anyone else of being too wounded by that which should never affect me. i am trying an enlightened path these days....and your words are definitely fuel for continuing on that chosen path. excellent write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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You lost me on the last stanza o.o but the first stanza I loved it. So much truth in this piece:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing and uplifting poem. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Hmmmmmmmmmm, for me, it's little kids:) ERROR119632HT%#35'

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7 Years Ago

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7 Years Ago

Cool. I hate technology. It's not happening/has happened other than this time. Maybe I hit something.. read more
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Wonderful variety of analogies. Encapsulates the differences in personalities nicely. Excellent perception and description.

Posted 7 Years Ago


But whats really amazing here's, that
they all leave some, or the other
impact on us each time.....

and that is the truth of the matter... no matter what... above all else we need to understand and recognize that everyone is different and we all have our own purpose for being the way we are... judgement though natural need not be malicious but rather educational.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nicely done - an uplifting write

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved the message in the last stanza, good one. Thank you for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ah, they say we are a masterpiece of our own and that is how we are the true beholders of our own way knowing that we are being perceived. For we aren't just another piece of art but as a way of looking at it we are constellations also on the open night sky! Amazingly sweet defining piece :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


i love the optimistic tone of the poem which makes the rhythm flows flamboyantly.
"Because, we don't ever know,
that what would their existence teach us one time,
and then this same world,
looks really fine..!"
those were really wise words. this world is filled with myriad shades of human nature, and each one one of them makes an impact on us in their own way.loved the diction of your write and its flow. thaks for sharing.



Posted 8 Years Ago


This was really awesome!!!!! I love it!! :) I also love how you used different colors with the words

Posted 8 Years Ago



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