An Adventurous Child...

An Adventurous Child...

A Poem by Saumya
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'sometimes when we sit and remember our childhood memories, they teach us many minute but precious principles to deal with life...these are some of them i discovered:)

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Since the time I was a child,
i loved to gaze at the stars in sky,
their glitter,their shine , their spark
and the light,
filled me with huge delight..
and i always wondered,
what  made them shine so bright?

Since the time I was a child,
i loved to see the butterflies
pink, white, green, blue,
and some with beautiful stripes..
and i always wondered,
what  made these creatures fly?

Since the time I was a child,
i loved to see the rainboin  sky
i always waited for the heavy rains,
so that i could see it back again...
those seven colors
left me completely mesmerized,
and i always wondered,
what  imparted it,
such
immense beauty in the sky...

Since the time I was a child,
i loved seeing  birds
fly high in the sky..
and like all others
wished too,
to fly in the sky
and  always wondered,
why humans too, cannot
at least skid in the sky?...

Since the time I was a child,
i have been loving
every second of my life,
i try understanding and enjoying
everything around and nearby
and no matter how harsh is my life,
i live it like an Adventurous child
fighting with harshness,
 every moment in it i survive...

for if you live life as a child,
you'll never know 
what are worries and strife,
as they indeed aren't anything else,
but ' happiness in the form of pains disguised'
and as you walk on these stairs of life,
you'll somewhere clearly know,
that' you are the one who can create 
everything for you, by the only  attitude
you have towards life'
and that will tell you what's life...

 No matter people judge you today
to be wrong or right,
'always remember, that's never a full stop,
but only a comma of life'
live life like an Adventurous child
for a child never knows
what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain 
all they know,
is to sail through life
and dance merrily,
even in storms and heavy rains.. 

they never care,
what people say is wrong or right
they only do what they think is right...
and this is why
they are always filled with
 cheer and delight...

© 2014 Saumya


Author's Note

Saumya
i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please give your honest review and feel free to mention everything you want to with respect to this write:)
many thanks
saumya:)

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This is amazingly good. The repetition, the content and arrangement of your stanze. Indeed, if this world is like a child, we will bear no grudge, no malice, no struggling, no killing, no bad would be inherited in us, because is not a product of childhood. But you see, my very good friend, Saumya, its never like that, not always. The world has grown oid and full of evil. But doing the right at the right time no matter what stand against would always make us smile and once more we become like a child. An Advanturous Child. Thank you so much for this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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It has a love flow and message and I like the way you coloured the word rainbow with its seven colours.

Posted 10 Years Ago


theres not many poems i like that dont rhyme.
Although i love this one, Your poems always have such depth and such a deep meaning to them.
I love what this one is all about, i wish i could have that positive outlook on life to but its hard.
Very inspiring poem :)
Great write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A nice romantic write that will be read widely..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful write, you have a really positive outlook , never lose that. Too many writings focus on the pain and loss. I really enjoy the positivity you bring to the world. O.. and not to mention the use of color and illustrations to make the read more visible and alive. Job well done, keep it up!!:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank you so much Peter:P glad you enjoyed this write:)
This is beautiful.I just love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank you:)
I've always said that the secret of youth is all in the attitude.
(pssst...I just turned 63)

Posted 10 Years Ago


uplifting poem it is darling

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank you:)
that beautiful sis...loved is all the way long...


Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thanx sis :) glad u loved this write:)
A child's play engages many delightful things ... and sometimes when we come to know many things ... its also child's play. Nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


Saumya

10 Years Ago

thank u Dayran:) glad you enjoyed this write:)

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