You Don't Know Love.

You Don't Know Love.

A Poem by saviorys

You think you've been in love ?
Girl that was puppy love
Have a crush on all the hotties with that groupie love
Guys drool when you flash them that curve
Have license to shoot, them be your fur
You got the car, then guy got serve
Breaking a kid's heart, does he deserve


Dancing long hair
Buttons popped open here n there
Guys staring at your beautiful pair
It's ladies night, she hotter than oven,rich guys cash disappear
Leave big boys begging in tear


Giving out energy
Closet full of Gucci
Guys hoping you get tipsy
But nothing with you is for free
That's why people call you the paid fantasy


You don't know love
The boys got baby face assassination
An epidemic sweeping across the nation
I see you every evening in television
The guys bow down to your doll domination
Mrs evil, I ain't gonna be just another patient
I'm the new and improved Asian sensation
T300 with Connor,so you better seek salvation

Your tricks don't work for I am fusion
My moves smoother than Johnson lotion
Shiny all over your high-knee but I spank it no hesitation
Leaving you drowning in confusion
You might be hot, but I roll with the temptation
I'm old school, abandon you gold diggers at the immigration
Lock you up for faking love criminalization
Send the boys to the game for self actualization
They need The Game, when I wrote Revelation
I'm done, my words painted the illustration
5 minutes gone, another masterpiece creation.

© 2009 saviorys


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This reminded me of a rap of sorts. I liked it. It makes a lot of sense. I think if it is rapped it would go well with a similar beat as "Rhymenocerous vs. HipHopapotamus" by Flight of the Concords. Only this is more serious. But anyhoo, you did a fabulous job! Hope to read more from you!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hey friend,that was good..You THink You Know Love..
Have a crush on all the hotties,Guys drool when you flash that curve,Have liscence to shoot
Dancing long hair,Buttons popped open here and there,Guys staring at your beautiful pair
Its ladies night ,she is hotter than oven,Rich guys cash disappear,Leave big boys begging in tears
With you nothing is free,paid fantasy...Your tricks wont work,I am the old school
Lock you up for love criminalization..
That was lovely thoughts..I Am The Old School..ha ha
just loved this
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 24, 2009

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Scarborough, Canada



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