I know I am

a poem for my long lost friend

I'm not saying I'm not beautiful

I know I am.

I'm not saying I'm uninteresting

I can hold a conversation.

I'm not saying I'm too complicated

Only for some people.

And it's not that I can't hold a tune

just that I appreciate the voice that I have.

But sometimes it would be nice to hear that from you.

Author's Note

Wow I haven't written in a long time - especially a poem. Nonetheless, all feedback is appreciated. I know it's not my best but I've been feeling down and had to write something down before my head exploded.

Reviews

[moblues]

I love this, Scarlett. Sometimes we just have to say -- hey -- I love and give, too. Please remember that. See that.

May I offer just line spacing suggestions?


I'm not saying
I'm not beautiful

I know I am.

I'm not saying
I'm uninteresting

I can hold

a conversation.

I'm not saying
I'm too complicated

Only for some people.

And it's not that
I can't hold a tune

just that I appreciate
the voice that I have.

But sometimes

it would be nice
to hear that

from you.



Well done, Scarlett


Mike

[Neon]

Yeh .. it's a cool poem, you should upload some more cool stuffs of yours. Very nice thoughts and its seemed a realistic poem (ahh, of course it's a realistic piece.. lol) Keep on.

[MoriartyMesa]

There must have been someone in mind when the muse hit your mind? So who were they?

[prachi prangya agasti]

nicely written... and short but impressive.. good job!!

[Inspiring Writer]

Well written about your beauty, i know. I know you're beautiful and i'm not gonna object on it.lol
this write's good and written in a free time when yu were thinking abut yourself that ain't you an angel ? lol standing in front of the mirror.. lol, words're great and powerful. Title's too good and i'm sure its came from your own real life.

Last few lines explained that you were talking or missing your someone and thought to write few words in the memory of someone. Starting's great as well as ending. Writing style i loved much, you know very well that how a poem should be written in a well format. 10 lines of this write're awesome and powerful as well.

Well written and writing way's good, it's properly written in the poetric way, so don't worry, if you've been busy and havn't written writes in a long time... :) you're good still and talent's reflecting your beauty through your words. Nice work, keep writing.