i wonder...

just something i wrote when i was thinking... a dangerous thing...

i wonder when...

when the world will fall.

if it would roll down the hall

of lies and terror.

 

i wonder when...

when no one is hurt anymore.

if it would race out the door

into the streets of chaos.

 

i wonder when...

when everyone will care.

in its pain will they share?

or will some be undeservedly spared?

 

i wonder when...

when the end will arrive.

if they will swarm like bees in a hive,

as we ask where have all the good ones gone?

Reviews

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I liked this one a lot..it asks a lot and leaves a lot of room for thought as well. Nicely done.

[distefano 401]

very philosophical, it brought up many important thoughts and questions. nice use of repetition with "i wonder when...".