2 The Same

meant to be a song, but posting as a poem will do.

2 The Same

 

You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror

 

We look so much alike

Sometimes people get us confused

But I know one noticable difference

I have much more personality than you

 

You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror

 

Looking through a portal to another world

I see another me

Living another life

Who are you, now

At least I know who I am

 

You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror

 

You stole my smile

And you stole my name

But you're just two dimensional

It's driving me insane

How we're so much alike

 

You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror

 

You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror

 

Everything that's reflected

Must have a reflection

Are we the same

It's driving me insane

Which one of us is real

Where does the reflection end

 

We're two the same

We're two the same

It's driving me insane

We're two the same

We're two the same

 

You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror

 

You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror

 

You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror

 

We're two the same

It's driving me insane

Reviews

[Deckster30]

that is preety awesome i could never do that

[Delightfully Demented]

Simply awsome! (;

[AaronPhobia]

i like it [ =

-Aaron

[Rockebah]

The poem has a nice concept however i think repeating the stanza directly after it has already been said is a turn of. You should repeat it once between other stanzas not twice. But thats just my opinion. Other than that it's great.

You stole my smile

And you stole my name

But you're just two dimensional

It's driving me insane

How we're so much alike



You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror



You're not me

And I'm not you

Don't you follow me

You just stay right there

Looking at the world from a mirror



Everything that's reflected

Must have a reflection

Are we the same

It's driving me insane

Which one of us is real

Where does the reflection end