Response to The Blocked Writer

Response to The Blocked Writer

A Poem by Tbear
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2-25-2008

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take a breath...close your eyes...empty your vessel...sink into the black ink of night ...ride your blood as it flows through your veins...give yourself time to be....nothing, everything, something,someone, everyone and forgive yourself the nothing for it will surely become...what you need,have and already are....

© 2017 Tbear


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Interesting, the poem seems peaceful when I first read it. I of course read it again and received aggression, yet calm ending. It seems like you forgave this person for being empty and allow them to understand their wrong doing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tbear

7 Years Ago

Ahhh your critique was exactly what I needed with this piece.. I believe the title leads the reader .. read more

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