"GETTING LOST"

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eyes stay open as tear drops fall, never thought it would be you to make me feel so small. The sky was above me but now I'm no longer that tall affected by feelings when you're not willing to connect or ,

 respect more, 

protect-or,

 I never have a protector or a love that's a human sword,

we're all human getting lost in a humane world, inhumane nobody gives a f**k world..

Souls getting lost not giving much but giving up much , never giving up even though you're down more than up but still stuck in the paradise when the sun comes up, the shade washes it away another bad day.

selective with the bullshit, stitching scars that stay

                                               STITCHING SCARS THAT STAY!

*(I JUST NEED A MINUTE)*

but yo, back to the story, back to the aftermath, feeling like i'm losing everything and I ain't have to add. they try to tell you the way you feeling ain't half as bad. But what I'm feeling is half of a storm and even after that. word is born, major dealings pull it out my back,

don't wanna feel it anymore just wanna shift to black, full speed ahead going no where fast, This can't last mind going in circles my brains crashed,

Head down, heart dropping feeling death through a flash, the reaper shaking my hand as I watch GOD pass,

I watch gods blessings, as I watch time pass, down to the minute and seconds NOTHING lasts!

Nothing lasts forever, even deaths takes off a mask, leaving a mess to the best of n****s who never trip off that , Tripping(s) apart of living they try to rip us off the map with too much going on. It's always this - It's always that!

Mind staying structured is the hardest part in rap but I don't rap I give it life just like my ribs form in my back but yea---

I'm a chic I spit it realer than n****s act,

performing(s) not in my blood but PERFORMANCE stays intact and all I learned, keeps me pushing  when I feel like falling back, 

got 7 reasons to keep on breathing without them my worlds black!

so umm,

keep the vines growing, gotta be stronger than that  as long as my kids breath believe I'm a breath right back!!!

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

I love this write! So raw and so honest... feelings and emotions just gushing out into words in this piece. I got 4 reasons to keep on breathing just like you got 7... sometimes that's all we need to find peace and happiness in this world that constantly seems to try to bring us down. But for them, we stay strong and continue to fight and continue to get stronger. Beautiful work my friend :)

[silent poet]

Thank you so very much Aaron.. Means a lot all you said. I appreciate you! And you're so right sometimes all we need to find peace and happiness.. Again thank you friend very much :) :)

[Christoph]

I forgot to breathe for a minute there.

[silent poet]

lol It's how I felt exactly as I wrote it

[Rm]

There is a lot of the right things in this...awesome!

[silent poet]

why thank you! :) I appreciate that (Rocky! )love the name..

[Rm]

Thank you too:)...

[silent poet]

You're Very welcome :)

[Rm]

:).......cool

[Some Kind of Poet]

Great rhyming, nice flow. It was lovely to read your writing, thank you for sharing!

[silent poet]

Thank you much :)

[BLitZeD]

nicely paced and consistent flow n rhymes

[silent poet]

Appreciate it always *MM*