A Poem by Pitta S Dev

How sweet it would be if I were a Fly
that I can fly to any far and to any corner
find my angel and see her admiring always
I can fly to sky above if she is in flight flying far
I can sneak to her kitchen and smell her delicious dish cooking
I roll under her closed door and see her beauty manifesting
I jump on her face and wake her up if she fall asleep at work
No no no not that simple life I tread for
I lie on her monitor and watch her fingers dancing on keyboard
I roll on her papers and remind her unfinished tasks
as she move, I’ll stick to her vehicle’s mirror admiring cute angel
All in all I will be with her all the time

© 2012 Pitta S Dev

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As much as 'flies' are such annoying little critters, you actually made them seem affable...sweet sentiment in your poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohh yea.. This definitely says how lovesick you are.. The admirable lady will surely want your undivided attention i guess. :) Nice write.


Posted 9 Years Ago

love this. "..and see her beautify manifesting' love love this~

Posted 9 Years Ago

mr bujji, we are not free as a fly

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on August 24, 2012
Last Updated on August 24, 2012


Pitta S Dev
Pitta S Dev

Visakhapatnam, AP, India

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