Just a feeling

Just a feeling

A Poem by Pitta S Dev

i  see a star that dropped from heavens above
sat in divine blue with angelic glory
on floor that’s so mundane but is made special by her touch


This cute girl with her wondrous visage resurects dead poets to life
hairlocks around her face like sunbathed flower is a blood veins of poet
her every glance a poem and her wink of eye is the song


She is shapely and beautiful to an onlooker
but for a poet she is a melody sweetly played in tune
and a wondrous art carefully drawn on canvas


Her dress in blue drives any one to blues
she sat cross legged puts the poet fingures crossed
and her gorgeous looks; Oh My God! are the waves electric


These few lines I sketched in hurrry
in my first glance at this loveliest figure
words conceieved at heart and delivered in ink.


© 2012 Pitta S Dev

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some women have such an effect that we truly are helpless in their gaze

Posted 12 Years Ago

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I like this...loved the flow..discriptions and imagery were great

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Added on March 12, 2012
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Pitta S Dev
Pitta S Dev

Visakhapatnam, AP, India

Published a few poems in 'POET' a journal of world poetry sociey, Chennai, India. 'Longing' a novel published by Minerva Press India, New Delhi' which turned out to be a bitter experience. Has a.. more..

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