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A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

I caught your heart

kissing it with my fingers

Words crept upon my mind

How can it be?

knots tied to our hearts

pulling and tugging 

darkness lifted 

Smiles formed

Who caused this?

© 2011 Misty Blue Eyes


Author's Note

Misty Blue Eyes
its short but i like it

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well you're not alone, I like this one too ;)
In fact, I think this will be put in my fav list because of how creative and how attractive this poem was.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"knots tied to our hearts
pulling and tugging
darkness lifted "
I like this poem too. I like how you made your points. I like the question at the end of the poem. Thank you for the excellent short poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Question marks for a title seems a little uncertain
but the writing backs it up with the answer, nicely
done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it too! It is cute and sweet!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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sometimes short is very sweet..as is this..

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it.. It is short, but doesn't need anything... I like the idea of catching and kissing with fingers..

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like it too- is lovely and very touching. wonderful work!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes

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