Smiles Across Your Face

Smiles Across Your Face

A Poem by Michael G. Smith
"

My wife's sunrise smile

"

Droplets dew settle sweet
Upon a flower
 gentle sway

Cricket's empathy to the nightress sings

Symphonies which chorus soon negates


Darkness surrenders into full retreat
Withdraws shadow from woodland's bush
and glade
To a new found dawn; rhapsody with fresh wet paints
Lending more to 'tis morning's coming grace

 

Sky red; a mistress blush
A rising star blowing warm kisses feint
Beams and winks and such
Sets felicity up, atop this unveiling stage 
 

But yet, a greater anticipation awaits
Than the dawn out yonder which heaven breaks
As the sunrise pales in comparison to the brighter
Summer smile now waking rapture across your face

© 2017 Michael G. Smith


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"As the sunrise pales in comparison to the brighter
Summer smile now waking rapture across your face"

I loved these lines! Some people's smiles really light up our days. A beautiful write which I enjoyed 😊


Posted 7 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

7 Years Ago

Thanks again, My wife Milagros's smile is of course the inspiration for this piece.
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome! A pleasure 😊
Awwww, that's very sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

Thanks, my wife is my life inspiration.
Such a beautiful melding of nature and love, Michael. Your love makes the world a brighter place, and your poetry has captured your emotions.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Thanks Joyce, that means a lot.
So sweet and beautiful! What an incredible ode to something that is so beautiful and important. There is nothing like the light of love...shining, warming, brightening even the darkest of hours and days. Hang on to this feeling, it's a keeper. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I have seen the light. Lol
This is a beautiful write Mike - keep this smile on her face then the light in your life will never fade.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Great advice.
Your mornings must surely be always beautiful, make her always happy so that this smile will never fade.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

That's my duty as a good husband keep her happy, feeling young and the spice in our marriage.
Wonderful! And Oh, the last stanza ;')
Though it was a bit hard for me, I don't know that many words :p

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment.
This is so bright and beautiful, Michael! Your love for your wife and her smile radiate from the screen! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rita. Your comments are always inspiring.
As the sunrise pales to what's evermore becoming brighter
A warmer summer smile waking rapture across your face

You are a romantic. Lovely poem. Some real beauty.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

I am, doesn't it make life more worth living?
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

I can sometimes.
Hey, buddy ... you know what, you really do love your wife much, it's showed by this piece. It's a very wonderful piece... Am glad in this cruel world, such kinda guys're still present as you are. Well penned piece, dear Michael ...

May god bless you ...
Happy future life with your beautiful wife.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

My wife is my second chance at happiness and I will not muck it up this time. Thanks for the kind wo.. read more

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Added on March 7, 2013
Last Updated on March 4, 2017
Tags: smile, sunrise, nature, morning, beauty, wife, sky, star


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