Dust Bunny Thoughts

Quiet isn't the best place

With my thoughts I should be

For they ramble on and on

About nothing 

Yada yada gossip and

More and more about insecurities

Then when the noise comes back

It's way too late for any hope of rescue

I am already focusing in on them

Believing as days recycle

Regurgitate begin and end

Never rid of those damn dust bunnies

Reviews

[Moniba]

Can I criticize this one a bit? I think yada yada and the word regurgitate ruin the poem... Otherwise the idea is good and the lines are not bad.

[Michael G. Smith]

But that word and phrase tell the exact mood I am trying to get across.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I'm glad I'm not the only one with such thoughts. :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Now I have to do one called cobweb thoughts. Where is that darn spider?

[ms. barrie]

Very witty, I thoroughly enjoyed the unique insightful honest imagery you
Incorporated in this write, Micheal. Very relatable, those dust bunnies,
their cacophony gossip mongers, need to be sprayed with pledge,
I prefer vanilla/lavender scent.

I rather dwell in solitude, and rejoice in the silence, trying to only
Listen to the voice of my Muse.

Anyhow, this is brilliantly penned. Thanks for sharing :)

[Michael G. Smith]

They're like tumbleweeds in the head. Your welcome.

[ms. barrie]

The voices in my head are my only true friends. No I won't let them
Come and take me away, damn it! :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Hurry throw blanket over you and hide in the corner until they go away!

[ms. barrie]

I'll sing loudly at them, they'll go away, trust me, :)

[MOON]

The chatter in our head, lovely piece love the dust bunnies.

[Michael G. Smith]

the white noise of thought.

[Cassie]

Sometimes quietness brings a feel of peacefulness although I agree with you that sometimes it is not the best of things to do.

[Michael G. Smith]

if we don't protect our thoughts the adversary tries to sneak in the back door.

[Frieda P]

I think this one will resonate with many, I know it did me, dust bunnies begone, they need a spray or something....clever read Mike.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Frieda.

[Rita L. Sev]

This is a great piece, Mike - like the ever-present crud under the bed, no matter how much we clean house some crumbs will creep back in...

[Pryde Foltz]

If our thoughts must be dust; let them be stardust. Loved this. Mike.

[SyberRose]

Poetry is my favorite past time...I don't mind being alone...that is when I can think the best...I was gone for few days...just catching up Mike...Rose

[Marie]

I read or watch TV...anythng to keep from being alone with my thoughts...