The Kind Of Girl That Melts In Your Mind~

I'm the kind of girl

whose chocolate layers blend

through a man who gives good mind

and can take me straight or bent

a man who would be subtle through my mornings by the sea

and unfold me from my robes over some jasmine tea

with lemon glaze dipped honey

dripped against my hips

his kiss spread with the world

against my hungry lips

dying just to drown against a man who knows his soul

who knows just how to feed me without ever being told

to touch my cortex sharp

press his mind against my need

as I gently stroll his body

and drink his intellect like mead

stirred with captivating prisms and cultivated shine

I love my men inside of me

with swollen drips of mind

because I'm the kind of girl

that  melts into a man

who can feel me past the shell

and melt me in his hands

who gets me like a blade gets dipped in sallow blood

who can get me high off both intellect and love

because I'm the kind of girl who loves to slip between your thighs

but whose needs are never simple or easily defined

and though I'll take you deep

through my body on a sound

that purrrs against your throat

and digs it sleek or bound

what makes me melt against the bones

is a man who can astound

groove me on an exposition

of thoughtful candy rounds

and I will be your filling drenched in chocolate highs

burst sweet across your tongue if you give me deep, good mind

 

 

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Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

If I had a nickel for every beautiful girl (on the outside) I've known, that did absolutely nothing for me, I'd be Rich. The intellect is the biggest erogenous zone there is. Give me the bookworm in the nerdy glasses, that is kind, compassionate, confident, and mysterious, and she already looks more sexy then the girl with the smoking body, and a pea for a brain.

I need more. I need my mind stimulated, as well. You can only look at a pretty face for so long... and then what... is there anyone in there, is anyone home?

Now if you have the body, and the brains, well then... that is just the icing on the cake.

Selene, dearheart, you have one of the sexiest brains I know :)

Smart, and sweet. Loved this poetess!!!
Antonio xx

[Morning Star]

Wow What a divine tender Quills of Melting Seductions
Love the the tone the imagery that your seductive words capture
I absolutely love this piece
Kudos my friend
Have a lovely weekend.....Yolie

[Kyle Insane]

i'm actually admitting it: i love you.

[luciddreamer]

Wow...what a mind blowing piece of art :)...bravo

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. what a gorgeously done mellifluous song of the soul ... celebrating and embroidering quintessential feminine hues with a new palette ... refreshing ... endearing ... enchanting ... inspiring ... simply unforgettable ... i guess chocolates always scintillate ... :) ... shine on ...

[Marianne]

One of my FAVORITES from the book !!! It has everything to arouse mind, body and soul...authoritative, delicately sensual, mind-blowing...

BRILLIANT :)

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I love the confidence of the woman that really comes out in this poem, all the while hungering for a man of equal intelligence to stimulate her in return.

I love "a man who gives good mind." An excellent twist on the normal saying - head/mind, with mind being so much more personal and powerful.

Excellent as always. There simply aren't enough superlatives.

Linda Marie

[Gracie-San]

This very much reminds me of a song by Dead Prez called "Mind Sex" because of the subject matter.

Both your poem and the song talks about how it is important for your partner to stimulate your mind sexually but intellectually, too. Although, the way you went about it was absolutely mesmerizing and beautiful. It flowed very well and the metaphors used were great.

Oh, and I have to say that even if a man's body isn't that hot, I can still get turned on by knowing he is someone who values smarts.

Great, great job.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Now this one is sensual in ways and so very intelligent.It is always better to explore the cortical realms rather than just the physical...there is only a limited distance a physical attraction can take you..where as a love borne out of an intellectual attraction can go miles,it is rare that we find someone who understand s us and our mind completely.

[Robin]

to think ... perchance to love